I wrote my first real (read: not absurdly ridiculous) haiku today. The poem is about my commute into work. For those of you not familiar with DC, the Metro is the name for the subway system. Enjoy:
Their eyes meet, slyly
A secret Metro romance
Next stop: Heartbreak. Sighs.
love it. what an observant commuter. good thing they don't know they're doomed.
ReplyDeletehaha bravo, lucas!! i expect you to set it to music sometime in the near future.
ReplyDeleteIt appears you may have something other than a scenic DC view to occupy your time in the metro...
ReplyDeletemy heartfelt condolences about your heartbreak, mr. pappas. may another metro woman enter your life soon enough.
ReplyDeletethere is a haiku discussion forum on Nashville Craigslist.
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